Motivation letter for vocational high school apprenticeship
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Hello,
I am currently in the second year of high school and I want to change direction and pursue a career in computer commerce. However, I have my CV ready but I'm struggling with my cover letter and my teachers aren't being very helpful. Could you please give me some advice on cover letters?
Thank you in advance.
Have a great day.
I am currently in the second year of high school and I want to change direction and pursue a career in computer commerce. However, I have my CV ready but I'm struggling with my cover letter and my teachers aren't being very helpful. Could you please give me some advice on cover letters?
Thank you in advance.
Have a great day.
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Are you a girl or a boy? Because sometimes I see masculine and sometimes feminine.
Do you proofread and correct all spelling mistakes: repost it afterwards.
A letter filled with mistakes lands straight into the "vertical" classification, that is to say, the trash.
Blessed are the cracked, for they shall let in the light.
Do you proofread and correct all spelling mistakes: repost it afterwards.
A letter filled with mistakes lands straight into the "vertical" classification, that is to say, the trash.
Blessed are the cracked, for they shall let in the light.
Hello,
In 2 seconds on Google: https://www.google.fr/search?q=lettre+de+motivation&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&aq=t&rls=org.mozilla:fr:official&client=firefox-a&gws_rd=ssl
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Blessed are the cracked, for they will let in the light.
In 2 seconds on Google: https://www.google.fr/search?q=lettre+de+motivation&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&aq=t&rls=org.mozilla:fr:official&client=firefox-a&gws_rd=ssl
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Blessed are the cracked, for they will let in the light.
Thank you for your response, here it is, could you tell me if it is well structured please?
First Name LAST NAME
Full Address
Phone / Email...
COMPANY NAME
Company Address
City, on Wednesday, March 21, 2012,
Dear Sir or Madam,
Currently in the second year of a professional Bac in TUS, I wish to change my orientation, so I am looking for a work-study contract in order to prepare for a professional Bac in Commerce over 3 years, which is why I am taking the liberty of sending you my application.
Attracted by commerce and its opportunities, I wish to join your company in order to gain the experience and knowledge necessary to obtain my diploma.
Motivated, dynamic, smiling, and attentive to others, I will know how to adapt to the tasks entrusted to me, which will allow me to acquire the necessary knowledge for careers in commerce.
I remain at your disposal to arrange an interview where I can provide you with any additional information you may require.
Please accept, Sir, my respectful greetings.
First Name LAST NAME
Full Address
Phone / Email...
COMPANY NAME
Company Address
City, on Wednesday, March 21, 2012,
Dear Sir or Madam,
Currently in the second year of a professional Bac in TUS, I wish to change my orientation, so I am looking for a work-study contract in order to prepare for a professional Bac in Commerce over 3 years, which is why I am taking the liberty of sending you my application.
Attracted by commerce and its opportunities, I wish to join your company in order to gain the experience and knowledge necessary to obtain my diploma.
Motivated, dynamic, smiling, and attentive to others, I will know how to adapt to the tasks entrusted to me, which will allow me to acquire the necessary knowledge for careers in commerce.
I remain at your disposal to arrange an interview where I can provide you with any additional information you may require.
Please accept, Sir, my respectful greetings.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Currently in the Second Year of Professional Bac Tus, I wish to reorient myself, so I am looking for a work-study contract to prepare for a Professional Bac in Commerce over 3 years, which is why I am sending you my application.
Attracted by commerce and its opportunities, I wish to join your company to gain the experience and knowledge necessary for obtaining my diploma.
Motivated, dynamic, cheerful, and attentive to others, I will be able to adapt to the tasks assigned to me, which will allow me to acquire the necessary knowledge for careers in commerce.
I remain at your disposal to schedule an interview where I can provide you with any additional information you may require.
Yours sincerely,
Madam, Sir.
I don't see that you have proofread!
"Currently in a Second Year Professional Bac in Tus, I wish to reorient. I am therefore looking for a work-study contract to prepare for a Professional Bac in Commerce over 3 years. I am sending you my application.
Attracted by commerce and its opportunities, I wish to join your company to gain the experience and knowledge necessary for obtaining my diploma.
Motivated, dynamic, smiling, and attentive to others, I adapt to the tasks that are assigned to me, which will allow me to acquire the knowledge necessary for careers in commerce.
An interview will allow me to present my motivations to you.
Yours sincerely, Madam, Sir, I express my distinguished consideration."
Always write short sentences.
Also write in the present tense and not in the conditional.
Thanks again for everything,
Have a great day.