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BTS Management Assistant Cover Letter

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polly6 Posted messages 5 Status Member -  
moska Posted messages 11803 Status Moderator, Security Contributor -
Hi everyone

I would like to know if someone could help me write a cover letter for a BTS in SME/SMI management assistant in a professionalization contract???
I have a model but I'm not sure if it fits, I find that my paragraphs are not great!!
I am open to all your ideas, critiques, as long as they are constructive for my letter.
Thank you in advance!!!

example:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I wish to start a BTS in SME/SMI Management Assistance at the beginning of the 2009 school year. I am very interested in a theoretical but especially practical training.

I am therefore looking for an employer who can help me prepare for my exam through a professionalization contract in order to enhance my knowledge and put it to good use in your company.

I would be grateful if you could consider my application, and I am available for a possible interview.

In the meantime, please accept, Sir or Madam, the assurance of my highest consideration.

My signature.

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    the-eye Posted messages 133 Registration date   Status Member Last intervention   25
     
    Hello,

    You should highlight your strengths:

    Example:

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I wish to begin a BTS in Small and Medium-Sized Business Management starting from the 2009 school year. I am very interested in both theoretical and, especially, practical training.

    Therefore, I am looking for an employer who can assist me in taking my exam through a professionalization contract in order to expand my knowledge and apply it within your company.

    My professional background has allowed me to acquire rich and diverse experience in the fields of secretarial work and IT, along with a good command of IT tools and ease of adaptation and relational skills.

    Serious, meticulous, and motivated, I wish to bring my expertise and meet your needs in the best possible way. I would like to meet you in an interview to discuss in person the topics you consider relevant and to provide any additional information you may require.

    In the meantime, please accept, Sir/Madam, the assurance of my highest consideration.
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  2. polly6 Posted messages 5 Status Member
     
    Thank you very much for your help!! I will try to adapt it with my internships instead of work experience. Thanks again!!
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    1. the-eye Posted messages 133 Registration date   Status Member Last intervention   25
       
      You're welcome, it was a pleasure.

      Good luck.
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    2. the-eye Posted messages 133 Registration date   Status Member Last intervention   25
       
      Don't forget to mark your message as resolved.
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  3. moska Posted messages 11803 Status Moderator, Security Contributor 386
     
    Hello, see the articles on this subject in the FAQ:

    http://www.commentcamarche.net/faq/subject 6993 writing a cover letter
    http://droit finances.commentcamarche.net/faq/subject 42 the golden rules of a good application letter

    http://www.commentcamarche.net/faq/subject 6566 job application templates
    http://www.commentcamarche.net/faq/subject 5229 templates

    Have a nice day.

    PS: https://forums.commentcamarche.net/forum/s/cover+letter
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