J'ecris des chansons , que pensez vous ?

Bonjour, je suis grande fan de musique et on passant du temps j'écris des chansons en anglais mais sans mélodie j'essaye et j 'y arrive pas alors je cherche un compositeur(trice) et clairement en Algérie c'est toujours difficile donc j'ai besoin d'aide et voici l'un de mes préféré et voudrai savoir les points de vue des autres

verse :
one direction no more ,
guess I follow this road
let me burn this under the lights ,
off all your dreams and wishes for ?

think i never miss that
think i really meant to be
my decision was taken
even a word was spoken

chorus :
dreams hit me away so i don't know where i'm gotta go
i don't wanna stay away for another minute baby
i just can't stay away anything i'm fighting for
i don't wanna stay away

verse 2:
never says never ever so magical
if someone keep calling my name
don't let me fall save me
i don't i will fall or survive

just yesterday i didn't hold this opportunity
and now i won't throw promises
i didn't change i won't change this path
being brave being all i wanna be being best

chorus :
dreams hit me away so i don't know where i'm gotta go
i don't wanna stay away for another minute baby
i just can't stay away anything i'm fighting for
i don't wanna stay away
bridge :
don't like waiting to appear among
don't like rumors runaway, pressure in my head
idon't cry i don't stress for a love i act like i'm fine
and keep my hands up in the air in the air .....

chorus :
dreams hit me away so i don't know where i'm gotta go
i don't wanna stay away for another minute baby
i just can't stay away anything i'm fighting for
i don't wanna stay away
idon't wanna stay away
idon't wanna stay away


merci
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