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Marie
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Raymond PENTIER Posted messages 58546 Registration date Status Contributeur Last intervention -
Raymond PENTIER Posted messages 58546 Registration date Status Contributeur Last intervention -
Hello,
I don't know where to post this, but I would like you to help me correct the mistakes
I was told during an interview that there were mistakes, but I don’t see which ones
The mission you wish to assign to your future Secretariat convinced me to submit my application.
I have acquired, as part of my training in Professional Baccalaureate Secretariat, a perfect mastery of the administrative field: mail entry, switchboard management, use of Word, Excel, Access, and various software.
Dynamic and motivated, I learned during my several weeks of internship in the company the listening skills necessary for this position.
I remain at your disposal for any further information and I ask you to accept, Madam, the expression of my distinguished salutations.
I don't know where to post this, but I would like you to help me correct the mistakes
I was told during an interview that there were mistakes, but I don’t see which ones
The mission you wish to assign to your future Secretariat convinced me to submit my application.
I have acquired, as part of my training in Professional Baccalaureate Secretariat, a perfect mastery of the administrative field: mail entry, switchboard management, use of Word, Excel, Access, and various software.
Dynamic and motivated, I learned during my several weeks of internship in the company the listening skills necessary for this position.
I remain at your disposal for any further information and I ask you to accept, Madam, the expression of my distinguished salutations.
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Hello
The mission you wish to assign to your future Secretary has convinced me to submit my application.
I have acquired, during my training in the Professional Baccalaureate in Secretarial Studies, a perfect mastery of the administrative field: typing correspondence, managing the switchboard, using Word, Excel, Access and various software.
Dynamic and motivated, I have assimilated the listening skills required for this position during my several weeks of internship in a company.
I remain at your disposal for any further information and I ask you, Madam, to accept my highest regards.
mastery----maîtrise
future------futur
necessary---nécessaires
asked-------prie
I only point out spelling mistakes and not the way of writing this letter
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Curiosity on CCM is not a flaw but a quality
The mission you wish to assign to your future Secretary has convinced me to submit my application.
I have acquired, during my training in the Professional Baccalaureate in Secretarial Studies, a perfect mastery of the administrative field: typing correspondence, managing the switchboard, using Word, Excel, Access and various software.
Dynamic and motivated, I have assimilated the listening skills required for this position during my several weeks of internship in a company.
I remain at your disposal for any further information and I ask you, Madam, to accept my highest regards.
mastery----maîtrise
future------futur
necessary---nécessaires
asked-------prie
I only point out spelling mistakes and not the way of writing this letter
@+
Curiosity on CCM is not a flaw but a quality
Good evening
and since it seems that Marie (what a beautiful name) is feminine, and that the rules of agreement with the verb avoir haven't changed since my tender childhood, I also suggest writing:
....your future secretariat has convinced me
me being a direct object complement placed before the verb.
kind regards
and since it seems that Marie (what a beautiful name) is feminine, and that the rules of agreement with the verb avoir haven't changed since my tender childhood, I also suggest writing:
....your future secretariat has convinced me
me being a direct object complement placed before the verb.
kind regards
... and "... your future secretary " would be more appropriate than "... your future secretariat " ...
I would have made these changes:
The mission you wish to entrust to your future secretarial position convinced me to submit my application.
Through my training in Professional Baccalaureate Secretarial, I have gained a perfect mastery of the administrative field: mail entry, switchboard management, and the use of Word, Excel, Access, and various software.
Dynamic and motivated, I have assimilated the listening skills necessary for this position during several weeks of internship in a company.
I remain at your disposal for any further information and I kindly ask you to accept, Madam, the expression of my distinguished salutations.
The mission you wish to entrust to your future secretarial position convinced me to submit my application.
Through my training in Professional Baccalaureate Secretarial, I have gained a perfect mastery of the administrative field: mail entry, switchboard management, and the use of Word, Excel, Access, and various software.
Dynamic and motivated, I have assimilated the listening skills necessary for this position during several weeks of internship in a company.
I remain at your disposal for any further information and I kindly ask you to accept, Madam, the expression of my distinguished salutations.
best regards
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Best regards