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niko456
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Bonjour, j'ai besoin de vos dons de correcteurs en anglais cra je pense avoir fait quelques erreurs dans mon texte:
He likes to help in cooking ( je voulais dire qui n'aime pas faire la cuisine mais qu'il préfère aider)
Jason didn't celebrate Thanksgiving dinner with his family because he was in France. Consequently, he didn't see his family but he called his mother...
His family put a picture of him on the table.
He has never seen the famous Tksgvg Day parade in person but he can watch on TV.
To be honest, He didn't care too much about the parade.
He watch thgvg parade on TV for fives minutes and he goes to sleep.
merci de votre aide
He likes to help in cooking ( je voulais dire qui n'aime pas faire la cuisine mais qu'il préfère aider)
Jason didn't celebrate Thanksgiving dinner with his family because he was in France. Consequently, he didn't see his family but he called his mother...
His family put a picture of him on the table.
He has never seen the famous Tksgvg Day parade in person but he can watch on TV.
To be honest, He didn't care too much about the parade.
He watch thgvg parade on TV for fives minutes and he goes to sleep.
merci de votre aide
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1 réponse
J'suis pas très forte en anglais mais je sais que cette phrase est a modifier:
"He watch thgvg parade on TV for fives minutes and he goes to sleep."
==> He watched thgvg parade on TV for fives minutes and he went to sleep.
t'as commencé l'histoire au passé, cette phrase doit etre mise au passé également.
Pour le reste du texte, j'laisse les autres s'en chargé, jvois pas d'erreur...
"He watch thgvg parade on TV for fives minutes and he goes to sleep."
==> He watched thgvg parade on TV for fives minutes and he went to sleep.
t'as commencé l'histoire au passé, cette phrase doit etre mise au passé également.
Pour le reste du texte, j'laisse les autres s'en chargé, jvois pas d'erreur...
