Letter of motivation advice
clementin
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Hello,
I would like to have an opinion on my cover letter: I am applying for a nurse position in a private establishment:
Sir,
I am currently preparing for the school nurse competition.
I wish to invest myself in a professional project within your establishment in order to apply my knowledge in the field of prevention and health education to students.
I am ready to accompany each young person, promote their autonomy, and make them responsible by allowing them to find a community living space.
Moreover, we could organise an effective partnership with the entire teaching staff.
I would be happy to discuss my experience and my project with you.
In the meantime, please accept, Sir, the assurance of my distinguished regards.
OR
Sir,
I would like to invest myself in a professional project as a nurse in order to utilise my knowledge in the field of prevention and health education.
[ In order to best approach this position, I am currently preparing for the school nurse competition.]
Accompanying each young person, fostering their autonomy and contributing to making them responsible by allowing them to find a community living space ?
If that is your aim, then it will be mine as well by organising an effective partnership with the whole teaching staff.
I would be happy to ...
In the meantime ....
Here are two versions; if you could help me, I want my letter to be impactful and well written
thanks for your advice
I would like to have an opinion on my cover letter: I am applying for a nurse position in a private establishment:
Sir,
I am currently preparing for the school nurse competition.
I wish to invest myself in a professional project within your establishment in order to apply my knowledge in the field of prevention and health education to students.
I am ready to accompany each young person, promote their autonomy, and make them responsible by allowing them to find a community living space.
Moreover, we could organise an effective partnership with the entire teaching staff.
I would be happy to discuss my experience and my project with you.
In the meantime, please accept, Sir, the assurance of my distinguished regards.
OR
Sir,
I would like to invest myself in a professional project as a nurse in order to utilise my knowledge in the field of prevention and health education.
[ In order to best approach this position, I am currently preparing for the school nurse competition.]
Accompanying each young person, fostering their autonomy and contributing to making them responsible by allowing them to find a community living space ?
If that is your aim, then it will be mine as well by organising an effective partnership with the whole teaching staff.
I would be happy to ...
In the meantime ....
Here are two versions; if you could help me, I want my letter to be impactful and well written
thanks for your advice
2 answers
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Hello! :-))
At first glance, I prefer the first version. But it's just my personal opinion, you can do with it what you want. ;-)
Otherwise, you can check out this excellent Green Day article, contributor on this forum.
And pay attention to the accents in your letter. :-)
See you
** Nils ** -
Your sentence translated to English:
"she is really good your cover letter, me too I’m preparing my nursing entrance exam, well, bye."
