Comment trouver un ryhtme ( air ) quand on a les paroles?

Hello les gens!!
Et bien voilà , j'ai commencé à créer ma première chanson ( dont je ne trouve toujours pas le titre! ) , et j'aimerais bien que vous me disiez si elle est correcte ou non .
Mais le problème c'est que j'ai beau écrire quelques mots , j'ai beau essayer , je n'y arrive toujours pas à trouver le rythme ( l'air ) .
En voici l'extrait :

(Chyeah ! )
What's up?
You have a doubt on what I am?
You're right
And I'm going to tell you
Leggo!

I'm this kind of a person
Who lets herself influence by someone
I'm just follow my own way
I know that appears completly absurd for you
But it's totally true
And if you want it
I can draw a picture
So what I want , it's just to follow it.

We often say that dreams can become a reality
And why not mine? ( why not mine? )
Because for me , that what permitted me to live
it's simply the music ( the music ).
It's my life , and I can't live without it.
(And I think that nothing is comparable to the Great Intensity <= ça je ne sais pas si je la mets!
to feel like music.)
It's like if I were controlled.
It's my obsession.


refrain:
So let me to live , it's all what I ask
I would like to rest just few minutes
To think about nothing , to make my head empty.
'Cause I think , my head's going to explode ( Yeah!)

It's not because I'm like this ,
That you must think differently
So I prevent you : if you hate me , I don't care! <= je trouve ça bizzare
But , what I want to say
It's just that you can't change me
( you can't change me )
It's my life , it's my life~
Wo~Wo~Wo~


refrain:
So let me to live , it's all what I ask
I would like to rest just few minutes
To think about nothing , to make my head empty.
'Cause I think , my head's going to explode~
Yeah ~~!!

Voilà !
Merci !


=)