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Bonjour,
Voilà j'ai une lettre de présentation à écrire pour ma prof d'anglais et je voudrais bien savoir si quelqu'un peut corriger mes fautes. Merci d'avance
Dear Madam,
My name is BIP. I am 24 years old and I am a trainee. I come from bip but I’ve been living in bip since September. I live in couple and I have got a cat called Mojito. I like making scrapbooking and dancing.
After my social and economic A levels, I have studied the foreign languages (English, Spanish and Portuguese) to the university of bip during four years. I haven’t passed my language degree. But I must point that I don’t speak English fluently. Then, I worked one year as a farm worker.
Afterwards, I decided to do a training in management because I have been attracted by the tertiary sector and the tasks and functions of management.
After my training, I would find a job that will enable me to put into practise my abilities gained this year.
Yours sincerely,

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