Rapport de stage 3e anglais

Bonjour,

J'ai fait un stage de troisième dans le service informatique d'une collectivité territoriales. Mon prof d'anglais m'a demandé d'écrire un genre de rapport de stage, en anglais donc, d'une quinzaine de lignes. J'aimerais que quelqu'un me dise si mon texte ne comporte pas de fautes et s'il est bien pour un troisième.

Merci d'avance !

I chose to do my training in the computer department of the Regional council of High Normandy locate in Rouen. My training lasted two and a half days.
I wanted to make my training in this department to extend my culture and my knowledge in computer science because this domain interest me a lot. All the employees were nice with me and I was able to help them in their work and I could ask them questions about their job.
During my training, I 've observed the work of the computer scientists and I followed them in their interventions of repair. The advantage of this mission of repair is that the staff moves in all the services and meet lot of peoples.
To succeed in this profession, it is necessary to be available, competent and to have knowledge in computer science.
As this training interested me a lot and was beneficial for me, why not to make my job.

S.V.P C'EST URGENT !!!!!!!!